Shattered

"Very emotional and good storyline "

Amazing book

"Oh my goodness my heart! This was beautifully written... it made me feel so many emotions. I loved it! "

After Shattered

"It’s a roller coaster of emotions so sad in the first few chapters but then the happy chapters come 🤩🤩 LOVED it "

I truly love it

"Crying your hearts out.. then in the end chapters u will cry again.. The depression is not that heavy to read.."

Emotional read

"I did skim but the story itself is interesting. There is emotional in there with a love triangle feel added into the mix. I loved the characters. They were enjoyable. The guys in the story were so sweet. It is sad, sometimes boring but worth the read. Thank you"

Light and fun romance

"Genuinely interesting plot. I enjoyed the way the characters interacted with each other as protagonists and with their static characters like Jean-Luc. It seemed their unique personalities were quite apparent. Only because I'm pedantic about grammar, the story could have used more commas. I like to be able to follow the prompt and 'breathe' during sentences. I also thought it took a bit long to get to the juicy bits (Eve and Terry's relationship) and Eve's grief could have been spread liberally between chapters instead of condensed. I thought that made it a little overwhelming. Otherwise, great story."

Good read

"Love the characters. Nice storyline. Good writing."

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Interesting

"The blurb of the story is pretty self explanatory. I have to say however that I don't quite agree with the main character handled her situation in regard to her and Ken in the beginning. The first few chapters were long but allowed you to see the relationship between her and Michael. I liked their dynamic. However, I did feel like the story took a while to get to the point of the main plot. Other than that the writers' style is great. It's easy to read."

A little underwhelming.

"Ok so, at this the point the obligatory claus here is that I'm not the intended audience, I can't really say what the intended audience of this would be. Probably woman, can't say much more than that other than I would never choose to read this from the description or genre. I dont go near romance and I won't touch drama unless it has 'crime' in front of it. So that's just to tell you where I'm at with this and I'll try to be as objective as possible. As a first chapter goes, it's boring, no two ways about it. I don't know if any of the stuff in the first chapter is relevant to the story overall but it's just tiresome exposition with some dialogue and a meeting in it. Nothing interesting happens unless hearing you have a new boss is some great revelation to you. You have to put the interesting stuff in the first chapter to force people to read the next chapter and if that's the most interesting stuff to happen in this book then god help you. This stuff might be all really relevent but it should be relegated to the second or third chapter not the first, you get one chance to make a first impression and my eyes glazed over with boredom. There's way too much spoonfeeding, show don't tell. The story isn't established in the first chapter, so I can't say there is one, the characters are watered down, no one person really stands out. The dialogue is ok, but the first chapter just sort of ends. I can't tell if this is intentionally boring to justify what happens next in the book like american psycho or if this is just the bottom line throughout. I'm not going to know because I can't read the rest of the book, I can only give you my first impressions of what I see. I don't know what to say other than it reads more like a diary than a novel and no one wants to read your diary except you (unless you're a psyborg stripper from mars with machine gun for tits haha). I don't think it's trash, it's salvageably, just needs maybe some chopping and changing, revamping the first chapter to get a hook in the reader from the start. The rest of the book could be pure genius but no one is going to read past that first chapter unless you give them a reason to, I hope that was more helpful than just an outright reaming, I mean well haha. I wish you all the luck with it in the future."