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Unique

"Paragraphs are too long "

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Amazing

"Its great... I just hope we had the second part here too... Its truely like nothing I have read before. <3"

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I honestly don't know why you haven't make a movie outta this story. It's so amazing and so captivating and unexpected turn of events (cos I honestly thought Ashley is gonna die) I really enjoyed it. Keep it up but pls the second book

"I like the fact that Ashley is a strong woman I'll like to recommend this book to most of my friends who also loves reading horror novel. Everything is good"

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Plot was awesome ....Cant think of anything else 💖💖

"It was totally Superb .Loved it in all ways"

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A rare gem

"Unique premise not beyond the realms of possibility. Engaging read. Excellent character development. Chapters could be shortened, but the flow was very good! "

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Awesome

"I love it but will also love to read the book 2 here, thanks."

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Tiffany

"This book is honestly so creative and really amazing. I don't think I disliked anything, I rather like all the unexpected things that occurred in the book."

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Love it

"I love the writing style and the original plot is wonderfully pulling me along each of the chapters! Please keep sharing your stories!"

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Venom

"So I won't get to read the second part here, so bad😭i so much enjoyed the story. Thumbs up to the writer"

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Dead in bed is a good read. I'd recommend it to anyone.

"This is a great story. Good writing style. The caracter development is good, and the story line is great. I'd recommend this book to anyone. "

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Review

"No matter how hard I tried, I couldn't put my phone down and stop reading. The whole sex craving was bizarre at first but it grew on me. I loved it"

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Nothings wrong in this book I love it from the beginning till the end of the chapter Its different from other books there is nothing to tell what I like and what I dislike The book is so amazing Love it I can't wait to read the se ona book

"Yeah I really love this story it's so good Sometimes it makes me s a red or what happened in the story but apart from that I enjoyed reading it Well I can't wait for the update "

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Phenomenal

"This is professionally written and I have only seen around a few, small mistakes. If you’re a horror fan looking for an original concept with strong main characters, this is the book for you! Well written, bone chillingly detailed, and a disturbing but good story to tell! I can’t wait to see what other stuff this author comes up with! Totally worth the read and time. There is much potential and talent here!"

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amazing std dude

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Dead in bed

"This story is one of my most fave..I had'nt read something like this before..it's very unique and I'm so hooked on this..You're really good on this author..keep it up and good job!thumbs up!"

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I Actually Love This Book

"Amazinggg!!!!"

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Oreo

"I like everything about this book ..... Grammar on point and I actually felt like I was seeing everything happening..... Well written.... Thumbs up😊"

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Dead in bed

"All is fine"

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Wish there was more

"really I cant read the second one on here ;( so good didnt want it to end...Soo sad I wanted to read more now I have to try and talk my husband into buying it ..."

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Dead in bed

"Like the story grammar errors"

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