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GREAT STORY!

"Realty enjoying this story and the plot! Loving the spice too!"

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Please

"Please write another chapter. It’s cruel to leave us hanging. "

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Perfect mafia story

"I liked everything about this redding... Unless the ends... I want to know more about! Finished the reading in 2 hours! Really kept my curiosity until the end. "

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Aquiescence

"This is a good story and I like her the author has done done with character development and story plot.. Very enjoyable entertaining With action and and subtle erotica scenes. Look forward to seeing where the story goes and the the culmination of of their relationship."

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Good

"Really well written with a lot of mystery"

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Very good story

"It has a good storyline and nice characters."

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Intense!

"Suspenseful and intriguing! I can't wait to see if Lola decides to stay with him at the end of her four weeks or if she will leave."

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Keep it up! 👍🏻

"It was a good story and the plot is amazing. Keep it up ! 👍🏻"

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Acquiesce

"The mystery and the attraction keeps you waiting more. "

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Great read so far

"So far its great. I cant wait to find out more."

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Very intriguing

"I really enjoy the mystery and intrigue of it all.. I can't wait to read more of it and see where it goes.."

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Submissive

"Great story, keep it up 😘😘😘"

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Holy crap!!!!

"Damn my life into oblivion... This book... Wow. Just wow. It's so amazing, the last chapter on 167,i nearly fucking cried, she's giving herself over to him and he seems like he doesn't give a flying fuck... I really relate to her, I second guess every choice I made, will this benefit me? Why am I doing this? Is it worth it? Why am I over thinking every thing ever, I love this book so much, it's right up there with lucifers gift. Keep up the amazing work!!! "

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Good

"Good steamy story "

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Interesting

"Interesting story"

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Acquiescence

"Great story. Well done "

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Great story so far.

"Concerned about what happened to Candace. Don't like being left in the dark about that. Curious who the boss really is."

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