Inkitt
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Teaser

"I love the plot and what is available of the characters has such promise! It seems that this story may have been abandoned. That is a shame. I'd love to read the full story! "

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Sexy story so far

"Enjoying the sweet yet sexy characters and scenes. Looking forward to more"

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Very Fun!!!

"This story has been surprisingly fun and very interesting to read. It's nice to read an alien story that is so different from the others I have read."

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Love

"Please update soon it’s so good! X3"

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Really good

"Please continue writing this and your other book amber one. They are really good and you write really great reverse harem books I especially love the human/alien ones you write."

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Atlas

"Well written hope to read more chapters from this book"

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Amazing

"I love the plot and how it just flows you have a really unique way of writing"

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SS Atlas

"Storyline is very intresting. I want read more 😄"

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Can't wait for more!

"Can't wait to see where this goes"

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Would love to read more

"Please update soon, I would love to see where this story goes"

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Great story

"Great story, can’t wait for the next chapter"

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