Definitely Needs an edit

"I greatly wish I could’ve rated this book with higher ratings. I can see how hard this author tried for this novel. I just didn’t feel I could immerse myself in this story . The plot was very unclear and when I became slightly clear, it jumped somewhere else completely. I personally wouldn’t have written so much in italics , for that had me believing for quite some time it was just a intro. I believe there was foreshadowing in the beginning of the story but , I’m uncertain. Who knows? , maybe it’s just me who doesn’t get the story. Anyway best of luck to the author to keep growing in their books. "