His One Temptation by Jmcreates at Inkitt
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His One Temptation

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Summary

Taylor Hartman has transferred to UCLA for a fresh start from her troubles and the pressures of life back in England. When she becomes close to a group of friends, she just so happens to notice Santiago Hernandez. Dead set on not getting into another relationship after her last nightmare. She forces herself to stay single...until one night, that leads to becoming friends with benefits. When lines become blurred, it forces her to assess everything she thought she knew and felt. When tragedy forced Santiago Hernandez to move from England to America with his family nearly two years ago, his only coping mechanism was to act like he was fine while he was secretly battling his own demons. He's labelled as the womanising rich kid who doesn't care about anything or anyone apart from his family. And although that was true, everything changed that night... But when a British brunette gets introduced to his friend's group at UCLA, everything changes. There's something about her and he can't stay away. It leads to an arrangement where rules are put in place. But you know what they say, rules are meant to be broken.... Follow the journey as secrets are revealed and heartbreak is encountered through their story as the lies, sex, love, betrayal and family secrets threaten to tear their lives apart.

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Foreward

Hi and welcome to my story. This is my first time writing, so bear with me, there are going to be teething issues at the start, but I'll fix them when I've got time.


I hope you enjoy it as much as you can and I would just say that, yes, you will get frustrated with the characters. No character development isn't going to happen within 10 chapters. They will be realistic characters with problems that people navigate daily. They will make mistakes, but that's human. If you try and act as if you've never made a mistake, then this story really isn't for you.


With that being said, I hope you enjoy it and follow Santiago and Taylor in their story. I appreciate anyone who takes their time to read it, so thank you and happy reading.

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1. Foreward
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