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Too much!

"Sorry to say this, but it seems from the story telling you have either lost your way or gotten yourself confused with all the twists and turns. Not to mention the crossovers. You have characters coming in from nowhere, other one disappearing without reason. The characters from the fandom are only by name. And seem more like your fantasy AU rather than being the actual characters so many know and love. I'm so confused reading this. (I apologize for the brutal honesty - but the other review wasn't doing you any favors by lying)"

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