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Darkness and Light Book 4 of Godless Chronicles

"I truly love your story. You keep me interested in what's going to happen next. I am very disappointed with all ann the Grammer, spelling, punctuation errors etc. It feels like you didn't proof read your story at all. You amazingly use words that aren't in normal conversations, or that are scientific and use them correctly. Slow down, proof your work. You really do have a great story, however, mistakes take away from it. I'm surprised that no one has taken the time to point them out to you. It helps you in the long wrong. Can't wait to see what happens in book 5. Does Cloudhawk put on the Demon knights armor or not? Does he choose Hellflower, Dawn or Selene?"

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Darkness and light Book 4 of the Godsfall

"Thank you for a truly amazing journey. I find your creativity absolutely awesome. You kept me on the edge of my seat from the 1st book to the 4th and hopefully book 5 is on the way. Your writing provokes deep thoughts of being able to adjust to change as people and to also accepting things we cannot change. Cloudhawk shows deep determination and tarnacity to never give up easily no matter the challenge one is faced with. He is smart, kind and laid back. What a lovely rollercoaster ride, needless to say I am holding my breath waiting for book 5. Thank you for sharing your gift with us, I feel honoured to have had an opportunity to read and busk in your skilled writing.🫶🏽💐😍👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽🙏🏽 "

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Darkness and the light

"The whole series where an insiperation to read. Top writing skills keeps you entertained and reading for hours wanting to know what happens. The characters are so easy to picture fighting out there spats and silently planning espionage. Wish there where alot more of these to read but have had a great time doing so with your books. I thank you for the good times reading these. Good luck in the future and keep at it as you got talent"

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"Really good and nice ti read. I want ti read till the end"

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