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Great story

"It's a really good story. The author got everything right. Highly recommend to thriller lovers. "

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Wow.

"Wow. Your story left me asking so many questions. Why is she working for the government? What happened to her husband? What happened to her baby? Who is the man she is trying to kill? I am hooked I hope to read more in the future. Great work."

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The way a short story should be

"Writing a short short is an art in itself. You have a finite amount of words to woo the reader, bedazzle them with vivid imagery and a punchy, maybe thought provoking plot whose end leaves us to ponder and stew for a few moments in our thoughts and maybe reflect on our own lives. Thirty Two does all of the above with poise, panache and believable realism. Read the story for fun or read it to improve your own short story and general writing technique and absorb the way the writer spins this web of inner conflict between the main characters humanity and their programming which in summary says: "Mission first at all cost", or you may be next. Fantastic work and highly recommended read. It ticks all my boxes."

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