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Mysterious Death of a Mermaid

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Summary

A year ago, in an evening like this my lovely wife… was trapped up by a strong collapsing wave… I looked at the place of the bluish sea which stole my whole soul. Which killed me… Janny, you snatched my love… you killed her… My fault … why did I come to this place with my lovely Liyana?

Genre
Mystery
Author
Thrimali
Status
Complete
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

At the sea-shore...

Melting sun, in the sea like an egg yolk mixes with the egg white in the sea line made a tremendous colorful view visualizing red, orange, and yellow color mixture. The sky was firing, in the twilight. The light blue color in the sky changed its complexion soon with the setting out of the sun.

I was sitting on the beach watching the sunset. Thoughtlessly I was looking at the natural visualization of the nature.

Lots of couples were enjoying themselves as I did last year. Today I came here alone for the first time. I was cold-hearted, felt totally empty in thoughts today.

I could fly over back in my timeline.

From the childhood I loved the beach very much. It was my life passion.

I could remember my mother says that she wanted to come to beach when she was expecting me. From there in my childhood, I played here…in my youth I came with my friends, and specially with my girlfriend … memory brought tears to my eyes.

My last beach tour…

A year ago in the same place, a day just like today, I was sitting in the same place feeling love and happiness in the extreme of my life. Today I was sitting in the same place alone, as a single man who is insensible.

I felt like Liya sitting aside of mine. I talked to her…

Missing my Liya’s voice was a real…

My mind flew few years back to the past.

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