What is your opinion?
Great Potential
"The Creation of Fire is a very interesting story with memorable characters and an interesting plot. Fire Crystal is a very relatable character and she's easy to enjoy. However, there are many errors in grammar and punctuation that can be fixed with some editing. Overall though, I think that this work has potential to become a great novel. :) Notes for the author below this post. :)"
Interesting
"So the good first: I like the idea, it seems like a good idea and an interesting story. Yes the basic plot has been done many times, this is a different take on it and also the idea and story is a good one. What need works: the grammar, punctuation and other technical skills. In my opinion you should get someone to take a look at the grammar and spelling. I only read the first two chapters and there were a lot of misspelled words and other mistakes. On the review me board try asking if someone can do an in-depth review and work on it for you. It is an interesting story and I think would be quite good and fun to read, it's just there are a lot of errors in the grammar and spelling that need to get ironed out."
