Odd one out

"This is a weird story. There were some parts that was a little hard to read but once you read through the story it does become more clear. It’s a good story if you like a little Sci fi element but it’s not heavily influenced into the story. An alien race has come to earth to observe and report what they discover on. A young boy proves himself to a gang and they do come to an understanding. This writer is a good writer and knows how to make an entertaining story. The thing I would suggest is try and show what you want to portray in your story as clear because sometimes it feels like some ideas fall a little flat. Once again if you like a little sci-fi element in a story about 2 boys then you would like this story. "