What is your opinion?
Alpha King and the white wolf
"This was a great read. Very sexy and description. "
Alpha King and the White Wolf
"I love this story… "
Babygirl14$
"Really loved this story I would really love to see more about the other couples and what you can come up with stories for them "
Alpha king and the white wolf
"O really love this book hope you write a new one."
Alpha king & the white wolf
"Love it! It to be continue?"
Love it
"🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂😇🙂🙂😇🙂😇🙂"
Good
"Horny wolves"
Love this book it needs to be longer !!!!
"I absolutely love this book the plot and The characters are amazing and the detail of the book and chapters are absolutely amazing I recommend this book to everyone to try. "
Love it.
"A sweet wonderful book… I wish there were more stories like this. I loved it."
Good potential
"The grammar & writing style needs some work. Also there was times when character is giving “instructions” it’s not so understandable. The rogues there is no description about why they keep coming in large #s and feel more could have been done with the characters the powers are all over the place. It was good story just need more building structure."
Alpha king and the white wolf
"Nice plot, but to many "and then he did that or and then we that" some spelling mistakes o changes on the person speeking"
Communal Love
"The story is soft and interwoven making Layla and Jacob the connecting factor between several linked lovers. "
The Alpha and the White Wolf
"There is something sweet about this story and I did read until the end as the characters were likeable. The writing was a bit disjointed at times and didn't give answers I.e did Jacob get the pictured marking from Bella, after she nearly died to try. It seemed like a book for teens and the characters too immature to be married and having babies. Maybe it could be set a few years later and they could be in college. They wouldn't be made King and Luna in highschool. Just my thoughts. Congrats on your first book. "
Alpha King and the white wolf
"The main storyline seemed to be sex. Got to be a bit much. There were only a few plots which fizzled out quickly. The grammar and punctuation need to be improved greatly. Hopefully with the next book there will be improvement. I read the whole book. I don't like to leave a book unread. Looking forward to seeing what new happens with the Alpha King and his family. "
I can't go on reading
"I can't keep reading this story. The grammar, punctuation, and just the story itself. Things don't make sense, like how Layla knew she had all of these powers? That didn't flow with the story. It just kind of popped up out of nowhere! Use spell check and grammar check next time! But I just can't keep reading......"
Needs to be edited
"I started reading this but there were too many grammar mistakes - there, they’re and their as well as spelling mistakes I understand English may not be the authors first language but editing would help. Chapters 4 and 5 are identical too Sorry but I couldn’t go on "
