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flyer through this book so quickly, there needs to be a second!

"This book was so good, but there were little spelling mistakes. I was flying through this book. But then I got the end and it left me on a cliff hanger so I’m convinced that there needs to be a second one"

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Nice read

"Great imagination, will recommend to friends and like the story, very descriptive and makes you not want to out the book down."

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I enjoyed this story a lot and i really hope you continue

"I love the story, a lot and really hope you can continue or/and make more."

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Lost Magic

"Can't wait for the follow up, this is a great story with so much potential. I read the grammer errors but really that's not so bad, it can easily be fixed with word program. I see a great potential for your future "

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Love it

"Looooooooooooooooooooove iiiiiitttttt"

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Lost magic

"I loved the story line. I am sad that is over already. I did see some spelling errors but other than that it was beautifully written and a wonderful story. "

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Lost magic for the most part was a good book

"I liked lost magic was a good book but I hope there is another otherwise the ending g was to much of a cliffhanger "

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Lost Magic

"I liked the plot and the great description of detail in each chapter. I did notice a few spelling errors such as me which I saw spelt like be, and others. Advice I'd give the author is that after publishing your chapters, reread each of them in this app and then if you find any mistakes or misspells you can go back into the Inkitt writing app and fix it. That's always worked for me."

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Unfinished book

"If you want a complete story, I recommend not to read this book. It only has introductory part of a whole story. The whole story is not available. Feels like not completed. "

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It was nice..... But it's this the end? Won't you show how Riley went back to her village? I want to know more

"The book is nice and I like it but I want more from the ending...... I love it tho."

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Lost Magic

"I like the story line so far but a proofreader is needed. Too many grammatical and spelling errors. Excited about part two."

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The path

"So far so good. "

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Following

"I like the characters, although I'd thought she would get a thunderbird in that scene. The magic is a twist."

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