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More chapters please

"I want more, I'm intrigued, I love the story so far, it expresses real emotions, love it"

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each line feels carefully carved yet effortlessly alive

"The story leaves your heart aching from start to finish. It’s a journey through grief, quiet resolve, and the helplessness of being powerless. It feels unfinished and that’s precisely what makes it feel whole."

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