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The Lost Girl -On Break-

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Summary

A sweet shy young lady no older then 18 was found at the large gates of a small town in th city of pinewood with no memory of what happened or who she is. What would happen when her memories come back? Who is she?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating
16+

Ch.0 Character Introductions

: A sweet shy young lady no older than 18

was found at the gates of a small town in pinewood

with no memory of what happened or who she is. What

would happen when her memories come back? Who is she?

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Eloise Collins -17

Personality: Sweet, loving, shy, cute.

Looks: Long Dark Brown hair, small green eyes, 5" 3.


Mathew Gilbert -16

Personality: Funny, kind, bubbly.

Looks: dirty blonde hair, hazel eyes, 5" 9


Luke Williams -17

Personality: Funny, kind, sometimes on the meaner side.

Looks: Black hair, blue eyes, 6" 1.




These 3 are all of the main characters so far! I hope you like them! ✨ ✨
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The main character sounds so cute!!! I’m excited to read more!!♡

4 years

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