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Luna without a pack

"This book was awesome. The characters and plot are amazing. I can't wait to read more from you. You are an awesome writer. I would recommend this book. I hope there is a book 2. Thank you for writing. "

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Looking forward to the sequel

"I enjoyed this story. Short sweet, definitely needs a sequel. To much story left untold. I look forward to your next creative adventure. "

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Alice 01

"Great read. Very sexy. Definitely kept my attention. The characters are great, Alice bought into fast, almost too fast"

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Good Story

"I loved the writing and the characters were well written. You definitely ended this story with a lot of different directions it can take and I hope you write more "

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When is the sequel ??

"Can’t wait to read the next book "

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Ok story

"Good story"

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Luna Without a Pack

"Great fantasy story. Lots of drama. WOW 3 mates. Good wins over evil"

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This story so far is outstanding! I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold! Great job!!! I would recommend this to all my friends, the rating I chose is well worth what I read and the style it was written!

"I disliked nothing at all! The writers style and ideas for the story so far are fantastic! I can't wait to read the rest as chapters come out and see just how mucj more wonderful the journey reading this takes me. I'm definitely recommending this book to my friends, I know they'll love it as much as I did. Awesome job on your book so far 😍🥰"

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Caw1

"Compelling plot. As the story progressed, it has even more unexpected twists and turns. Looking forward to the next chapters."

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I’m at the edge of my seat

"Could it be what I think? I’m totally at the edge of my seat for this story! Awesome "

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Romance

"Love that the choices being made are made by the female lead. Love that the female lead is the protector."

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Wow

"Is this the end of the story ?"

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Destiny

"I thought there would be more suspense but it was predictable instead. "

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Enjoying the adventure

"It's a great read! Some misspelled words "

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Good story

"A little predictable but ouverall, a very good story. I would read book 2 in a series "

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More Than Spicy

"The plot was promising. I just had to skip over so much due to all the detailed erotica... this was way more than 'spicy' and the reader needed to know that from the beginning. As it is here, the story seemed as if the plot was intimate bedroom scenes between a threesome. I liked the plot twist at the end of the book and wish the book had more of Michael's transformation. Wanted to see how they all worked together to bring about peace, after-all there had to be a reason he was chosen to be the Luna's protector. "

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Needs better world building

"For personal reasons, I took a break partway through, and when I picked it back up I had to do the work of learning the world again. A little more world-building, character development, and full sensory description would be good (sight and hearing are done well; tactile is developing; smelling and tasting or minimal). This could easily be polished into a three or four star story. You have all the raw ingredients to be a skilled writer. Keep going; keep growing; and keep sharing your work. It deserves an audience. "

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