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Don't want to put it down

"This is intriguing and keeps me turning the page for more. There are not a lot of grammatical errors and I appreciate that. This was so good, I want more! "

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Nina

"I really like the creativity of the plot, and the style of writing, though I’d say it misses a bit in terms of how they express themselves. More nuances, tones, facial expressions I’d like to see more of, but is a personal preference. all things considered, def up to par with previous books of this universe."

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Awesome book!

"Great book. Love the way you write, the characters etc. Can't wait to continue reading!"

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A Song of Chaos

"I enjoyed the book very much. The plot was good and the characters were well portrayed. Editing would have been a good idea but there were not a lot of errors and some were amusing."

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A Song Of Chaos

"Perfect. I have to say I absolutely enjoyed reading this book. I would highly recommend this book to anyone who loves reading."

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Another great story

"This one felt condensed and I wished this story played out over more chapters but still highly entertaining. Lotus gives us another striking female character. Less selfish than Raven (Thier little human) but no less heart. The second female lead adds a bit of light hearted humor. I'm surprised by the "monogamous" nature of this one. Still highly enjoyed the flow of dialogue, the scenery and character development. "

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Great

"I can’t believe this story doesn’t have more reviews. Very intriguing. And so refreshing. Thank you author! Job well done"

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A Song Of Chaos

"It was so good I was caught up in the story until the very end. Nice one!👍👍"

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A Song of Chaos

"Great story, very original. Hope there is more like it"

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Love it

"It's too short"

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War and love

"A gripping tale of war and love, a page turner "

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Cayla

"It was a little fast paced lacking some pulp but the action and emotional parts really complimented the characters. It flowed very nicely and I’m happy to say I wish it was longer! Great read and I’m going to see if there are more works by this talented author!"

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A Wonderful Afternoon Read

"This was short and sweet. Very different from this author's usual storytelling. The author did a lot better with setting the scene and going deeper into the characters' thoughts which was a treat. This was more on the romance side versus the dark erotica. I wasn't disappointed but definitely wouldn't have minded more steam. The FL was strong and feminine, and the ML respected her as an equal even though they were enemies. Zuco was a sweetheart and wholesome at times. Their relationship was healthy 0_o for a enemies to lover story which blew my socks off. It is a spin-off from the Their Little Human universe that focuses on the other countries from the original MLs' planet. I would've liked more explanation of how these two new countries play a role in the main storyline or even experienced their home country. But overall, heck yeah/10 would recommend!"

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A song of Chaos

"I wish the story was longer and more of a conflict with the two main characters. It was fun and an easy read. Just a bit too short. "

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The story is intriguing, I'm curious to see where it will go next.

"I like the premise of this story, the characters sound promising and I would definitely keep reading to see how things will play out :)"

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False advertising

"Says it's complete, but it's an Excerpt. "

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