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Hopeless

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Summary

My teary eyes bleed blood Drowned into this silent swallowing sea Our souls are crippled and our hearts sowed with fear and impediments Handcuff by myriad Tainted by monsters Flaring of arrows in my heart Jingling the cries of innocent souls Their bodies tattooed with bullets Leaving our homes to an exile, we're no longer at peace Broken, imprisoned and entangled with agony Our bodies shivering in fear Seeing our girls treated in a mannerless way What a scandalous treatment As we wept seeking for peace and solace Waking up to the sounds of dreadful gunshots We've been defiled in our homeland And no one bats an eyelid Ana yi mana yanka rago We're no longer at ease, can we have a taste of peace and freedom again We're asking for elusive grace Muna waka da ganga da sarewa let our land be filled with radiance When will we sing the tales of success My ink will be my sword In revolutionizing the image of Nigeria not with guns but with the weapon of literature

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Hopeless


My teary eyes bleed blood

Drowned into this silent swallowing sea

Our souls are crippled and our hearts sowed with fear and impediments

Handcuff by myriad

Tainted by monsters

Flaring of arrows in my heart

Jingling the cries of innocent souls

Their bodies tattooed with bullets

Leaving our homes to an exile, we're no longer at peace

Broken, imprisoned and entangled with agony

Our bodies shivering in fear

Seeing our girls treated in a mannerless way

What a scandalous treatment

As we wept seeking for peace and solace

Waking up to the sounds of dreadful gunshots

We've been defiled in our homeland

And no one bats an eyelid

Ana yi mana yanka rago

We're no longer at ease, can we have a taste of peace and freedom again

We're asking for elusive grace

Muna waka da ganga da sarewa

let our land be filled with radiance

When will we sing the tales of success

My ink will be my sword

In revolutionizing the image of Nigeria not with guns but with the weapon of literature


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