Inkitt
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Amazing novel

"Great read. Really enjoyed all of it - ending I did not see coming. Great jpb. "

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Too good to be true

"I absolutely loved this book can't wait for the second one. You are an amazing writer. Loved how you kept me on the edge. Never really knew what to expect "

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Too good to be true

"Perfect read for summer night! Hope there is a sequel ❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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an absolute messy ride

"As my title says the ride was messy and worth every bump. The way the story is told between characters could have been done a little better but it’s good overall. I see the story was completed in 2022 i hope there is a part 2 somewhere on another platform "

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Where's the rest of the story

"I hate that the story has not been completed. When is the next edition being released "

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Unnecessary repetitive pov best to just forward by one chapter because next chapter is absolutely same as last from another cast point of view doesn’t make sense shallow plot also it’s a zero for me

" Unnecessary repetition like shallow immature plot "

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