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Hearts Have Broken

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Summary

There once was a girl who drowned the hearts 💕 of dozens. Her name was Aliza. Many asked her to dance, she polightly declined most or all of them. She danced with only those who were kind to others. No one knew, but she had fallen I love ❤️ when she was younger. Her love never ceased to burn 🔥 for this person. No one knew where he went or what had happened to him only that he had disappeared.

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1 - Aliza

Hi, I'm Aliza, my mom told me to start a journal in this journal that she gave me for my birthday. Today J. said, 'Good-bye.' before he left. I asked when he was coming back he said, he didn't know. I'm going to set up a spot I can write letters to him. I'm going to put it in the thorn bush where we used to hang out. Oh.. here come Estria my cat she is a calico and she likes to play with my pen. D is my best friend D stands for Darci. Her family is Joliene her mother, Dale her father, Josh her older brother. Speaking of Josh here he comes. I'll write a little later.



Josh came to say "Happy Birthday" and invite me to the Valentines day party tonight. I said "No" of course becuase I would only go with J. I'm thinking on going and hanging with D. I think she might be going with Brandon. Hang on, phone call.


It was D. Brandon broke up with her so, I invited her to go to the Valentines Day party as friends. We have been friends for forever. She was the one who introduced me to J. I'm planning to wear a new suit dress that is pink Fading Into purple it goes to my ankles. I will also wear my sparkly heels that go with the dress along with the choker J. gave me. Ohh, it is time to get ready. Bye!


The party was a blast. Too many people asked you to dance so, I sent them to Darci. Who I know couldn't say "no". The DJ play the good songs this year last year was horrible. I think Darci enjoyed the attention and it made Brandon jealous so, I think l night was a success. Good night, I'll write again soon.


Sorry, it took me so long to write. Nothing interesting was happening, but now their is a new fountain opening in Central Square and a band called Rose's is coming tonight to play by the new fountain on the stage. Ops.. Moms calling, I'll write later.
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