Dance of the Damned

"A great hidden story here. I really love the plot, the detailed horror (btw good call on the warnings!) I like the little bits of hot romance too! What I would suggest is perhaps taking a second glace over your chapters... a lot of the paragraphs are really long! and with speech you want new dialogue to be on a new line. But great stuff i will be looking out for/reading the next installments! "