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Too good

"Kept me hooked so far. Well done."

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Hot and heavy

"Tension has been thick since the beginning love it great story for it to be your first time I haven't been on that app in a while but it's a great story might have to re download it or will you be uploading the rest of the story here as well hopefully so bit overall lovely story can't wait to continue the read. "

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poly

"i really enjoyed this book. the plot was interesting. the smut is well written and not rushed. the poly relationship worked well and felt like all parties were equal. it's also nice to see AA represented in a healthy poly relationship and not only the male benefits or its abusive. this book felt more like the females were equal with male a real partnership. kai is a sweetie. i love how he loves nari. i can't wait to see what you write next."

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The Tutors

"Well written but has some grammatical errors. For your first story, it was amazing, had me wet all the way through. "

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The

"I love it some mistakes but love it"

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The Tutors

"Quite an interesting book...looking forward to more of your books."

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The Tutors

"Excellent story for this first time author. Good characters, story line and story telling. Pretty hot scenes so if you don't like it hot, then maybe this is not the book for you. Otherwise, please give it a read and you may find a new author to follow."

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The Tutors

"Wonderful book. I hope this is not the ending of this story? In my opinion great writing skill characters were off the chain. All in all I would read this book again. Thank you so much for writing this book. 😊❤️😊❤️"

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Sexy💦

"I love the book it make me feel like I'm there ! Please conutine this book ! "

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Nasty💦💦💦

"Unexpectedly good, Im more surprised and Intrigued. I like it. "

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Kai and Nari

"Really enjoying this book so far "

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Dripping

"I need more!!! I don't even know where to begin, but all I know is I am all in. This book has me hooked and dripping💦💦🥵"

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Good

"Good so far. Cant wait to see where this goes. "

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Review

"I like that the storyline is easy to follow.i also like that the details are just enough for use of imagination, but not so detailed that it gets repetitive. I dislike how short the chapters are (wish they were longer). I would recommend this to friends. I rated the story what I rated it because there is always room for improvement."

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So far so good

"Yeh good so far will continue to read"

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