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Hi i'm sally and this is my kitten her name is katie i'm 19 and katie is 9 so i was walking and i saw jack,jack is very cool but i had a hate on him so i was acting nice and than he said " well will you be my girl fri-" and i cut him off and risking saying "NO" and the next day i was at class writing a note for my lovely kitten and jack said "who's katie are you LESBIN?" and i said "HEY DON'T SAY I DON'T HAVE A CAT" and bully him next day zack said "lets be bestie" and i said "ok" but he acted like jake,but..he said "hey sally do you have a guess for our teenager old good days word" and i said "yeah is moon eclipse" and than we grow up together we were 18 now and me and my kitten use to hang out with me but now me katie zack together hang out it wad fun he had a kitten named kat because kat=cat so i was at the park with katie my kitten and kat Zack's kitten was in love with some weird cat food that is pink and than me and zack grew up 19 and than we fell in love and kat and katie found besties. -The End-
MY AGE: 12
MY GENDER: GIRL
MY FAVORITE FOOD DRINKS:CHOCOLATE,HOT COCO
MY FAMILY NAME: CRAZY FAMILY
THANK YOU
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