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I love this book

"I absolutely love this book I love the plot I love the characters. I love the character development I love everything even just the idea of it in general. I really hope that there will be a second book because this is just too good of a story to end right now especially with the cliffhanger I need a second book I’ve just falling in love with the characters and I can’t handle that it’s ended already.! Keep it up. This is an amazing story. ❤️❤️❤️"

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The Girl with The Fire Heart

"I really liked the plot of the story, and the authors writing technique is unique in a good way. "

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The girl with the fire heart

"A very interesting story to read . However ,I was looking forward to some reading when I saw the end😪"

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The Girl with The Fire Heart

"Loved the story of fire, air, earth and water. Love the explanation of each element. Love the fact that the love of fire and water has continued through the centuries "

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Throughly enjoyed it

"You can feel the emotions of each character going through heartbreak, grief, joy, and many more. It’s really cool how this author can write down emotions and make them feel so real. 10/10 would read again and again. "

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Girl with the Fire Heart

"Love the story. Just a few editing issues, nothing that a good proof reader couldn’t help you fix. I love the characters, although there could have been more to the danger element to the boy with the marble heart scene. Also, the girls that set her up, they got off much too easy. She could have been compromise or physically hurt! They had no regard for their friend and put her in a dangerous situation. I think Fire and Water should say to hell with the past and get married as soon as possible and raise a family of beloved children!"

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Buzzy42

"I like these stories I just wish they all had an ending "

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