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What is your opinion?
So far, so good
"Story seems to be off to an interesting start. Really interested to see how the relationship of Royce and Ro’Shae plays out. Grammar and spelling made some areas confusing to read. Putting quotes around dialogue will help the reader discern conversations better"
Trapped in the Closet
"I think you have the making of a great book and I can’t wait to see what happens next!!! The only thing I would say it to try and make it so that as the reader we can tell a little easier when they are talking to another person and when it’s them talking internally. Keep up the good work!!!! "
