05. El mandón y el mocoso (YoonMin)

Clare: Loved the second chance mate story line. But loved even more the strong female lead. Would love to a mini fic of this couple a few years down the line.

Irene: Its the story revolves in the same kind of situation I was hoping abit more like the story of Jane's family, life of mx and Jane, like how is the relationship between Lynn and Caleb more. Probably first readers who are starting to have reading hobby, I feel it could be higher rating but honestly I w...

Clinton Foster: So far, I’ve only disliked one draft. It was the last one. It’s a lovely book.

Authorhelper: Your story sounds really interesting! As a beta reader and book editor, I love helping writers strengthen plot, pacing, character depth, and overall flow while keeping their unique voice. I’d genuinely be interested in reading more of this project.

Authorhelper: Your story sounds really interesting! As a beta reader and book editor, I love helping writers strengthen plot, pacing, character depth, and overall flow while keeping their unique voice. I’d genuinely be interested in reading more of this project.

Summer Perry: Good story plot and great writing.

deadendfarm: It’s refreshing to have a male lead that knows how to fuck and is actually a kind and decent person who likes to caretake. More Theos!

Spring Melody: I loved the chemistry between the characters and the way their relationship developed. The story has plenty of romance, tension, and emotional moments that kept me interested. The characters have their own charm, and I especially enjoyed watching their connection grow throughout the story.Definitely...

Shawna: I really enjoying reading this book, I read it twice back to back just in case I missed something lol. Mira & Devryan are actually perfectly fit one another, even when they tried to deny it. You could tell that he wanted her, human or mystic, he was just scared to admit it to himself. She was scared...