Excerpt
Watching her carefully, she darted her eyes in the room, looking for a way out because the door was behind me and she had to pass by me to reach it. I could see how her breathing became even more frantic and I cursed again under my breath, remembering now that I was standing before her, half naked, watching intensely a woman who was on verge of crying and screaming. I didn’t even want to know how it would look like if someone else would come now in the room.
My ego didn’t miss the moment to show up and remind me that my body or my face didn’t have the effect I wanted on this woman. Not even close. And the next second, I started to feel embarrassed. Very embarrassed. I didn’t even know that I could ever use that word when referring to myself. I had to do something before this woman would faint right before me. Think about something, you idiot. If you were able to come up with this stupid plan, you should get out of it too.
“I want you to help me put on a new shirt.” Way to go, idiot. I couldn’t think of something else but it didn’t seem it worked because she eyed me suspiciously and now, I felt even more stupid.
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*Disclaimer*
This story contains strong language, steamy scenes and mature themes of physical and sexual abuse, drug use and death.
However, these mature themes will be just mentioned a few times. I will distinctly outline those chapters. As mentioned, this story may contain sexual material but it will not be the main focus of the story.
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Hello! My name is Eileen, nice to meet you all!
I have finally found the courage to share with you my first story. I really hope you will enjoy it as much as I do.
I still have much to learn, so feel free to write constructive comments but please be respectful. Also, I love reading comments, so please don’t be a silent reader. I would really like to get to know you.
I will try to post regularly, once a week, but sometimes I might surprise you. ;) I am very committed and I will not - repeat NOT - leave you hanging. I hate when that happens.
English is not my mother tongue so you might find mistakes, therefore, feel free to let me know - kindly.
Thank you so much for choosing this book! Happy reading!
thanks for this story, it's not easy to put yourself and your work out there for people to see, judge and criticize. I'm starting the story right now so I'm leaving a comment since you love reading comments
I am in the beginning of the story and already I am curious about this guy! AAAA! OK actually I was surprised bout this guy and this story's pages hahahahah. It will be my longest story eveer in Inkitt so far 😁😁 BTW nice to meet you too Eilen and english is not my first language too but good job girl you finished a story here already💕💕
Hi Eileen Reed,
I just finished reading your story Your Voice and I loved it so much. Your writing is raw and emotionally intense, and I kept picturing how powerful it would look as a comic.
I really loved the opening Excerpt where Evangeline is cornered in that tense room, her darting eyes searching desperately for an escape route, her breath coming in frantic gasps, and then the abrupt shift when he awkwardly asks, “I want you to help me put on a new shirt.” That moment of high-stakes fear immediately undercut by his self-conscious embarrassment would make for an incredibly cinematic sequence in comic form, with the panel progression capturing her terror and his sheepish vulnerability , .
I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw Your Voice into a comic or manga. No pressure though, I just think your emotionally charged scenes would come to life visually in a way readers will really feel.
You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt (Username – Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username – bennett_lol) so we can explore bringing your story to life visually. I’ll be thrilled to hear from you!
Regards,
Bennett.