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Can't wait for more!

"Well written , well thought out. I have read many books form many authors and i tend to look for grammer problems or spelling errors, or simply does what written make sense with the words used. What i found was just two grammar errors or mis steps. Just two in 39 chapters. To put that in perspective i have dozen or more in authors who sold 1thousands of copies of books. That is amazing in its self. This Author if not published should be and i can see a series of books like this. I know they would sell. I hope to see more from them. Keep going Keep writing you have a fan "

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Oh my god.. must read

"I love the plot, the characters, the setting, the world. I read the summary and wasnt expecting much to be honest but my god the writer grabbed my attention and yanked it down 39 chapters straight. i couldnt put this down at all until i had read what was out! I am sooo team syval but oh my gosh. more chapters please???? ***Edit - I dont know why this shows i have only read two chapters aside from my vpn/ad blocker.. i assure you i read all 39 plus the world notes.. writer do you believe me?? D: D: "

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Sucks you in

"I may be writing this and tooting my own horn but I really am enjoying this story coming to life. I hope everyone else does too :) "

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Second book

"This is the second book I have discovered to have anomalies, i.e. more than one mate. I don't like the idea in life and I don't like it in fiction The book has been well written and had a good story line right up to the duplicity. Thanks but no thanks"

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