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Surprising 70's

"The story gives a great visualization of the 70s. But the story isn't far along yet, so the plot is still hazy. But after reading the first few chapters, I believe it'll be an interesting story. There were a few errors in some parts, but most of it was minor. I am looking forward to reading more of this."

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Great Start!

"I love the pacing and flow of this story. Your description really facilitates an immersive read. The 'old' English used is just enough to give readers a feel of the 70s. Something I'd suggest is for you to add some more details to your blurb, something that tells us what the story is about."

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