What is your opinion?
The rejected white wolf
"Great story "
Good so far
"It's a very touching story so far, I like it. And u dont have to say a sentence then say I say, it might be just me but its weird. "
Love this story
"It had so many twists and turns. And a very happy ending "
Pups
"This was a good book. Your plot and characters were done well. I'm my opinion it was written more like a journal. One thing you can do is put more detail in the scenery and how your characters look and what they feel. Writing is not an easy task and publishing it takes guts. You did good and should be proud of yourself"
The Rejected White Wolf
"Great story can't wait for book 2"
The Rejected White Wolf
"I had fun reading it. ❤❤❤"
Fabulous!
"I agree, small spelling errors but a great storyline!!!!"
The rejected white wolf
"A few grammatical mistakes, but the story line made up for any mistakes. At one point i cried as if i was feeling their emotions. With the more stories this author writes, the better she and her stories will get! Absolutely loved the story!"
Love it♥️♥️
"Amazing novel ♥️ the storyline was fantastic ♥️♥️"
Love it♥️♥️
"Amazing novel ♥️ the storyline was fantastic ♥️♥️"
The Rejected White Wolf
"Holy moly, I love Selena's powers much. Fabian is just nice but they got 6 children 👶 "
The Rejected White Wolf
"I loved all the twists and turns and I just loved all that happened "
The rejected white wolf
"It is a good story but a bit confusing sometimes. You have to stay focused, if not you will lose the storyline. Well written and a good book to read "
They rejected white wolf
"I like the way it started out. I'm glad that they was mate. I didn't like that they had the fight and she was with pups. I don't like the way that they said she died. I don't like the way they told Selen that her mate had died. I gave it this rating because I don't know how it going to end. The punctuation is okay."
The Rejected White Wolf
"I enjoyed the story. "
The Rejected White Wolf
"I am tired of the female lead always running away from her problems. He loses his memory, she runs away at the first obstacle. She grants Susy mercy, then tells him he failed to protect the kids when she left the threat. Granted he should not have run to help Susy when she almost killed her after this was revealed but instead of dealing with it, she runs away again without giving him an opportunity to explain... and she doesn't let him see his kids. "
Brenda’s
"It was good but took me awhile to finish . I got bored real fast .finely finished "
Confusing/flaws
"I tried to get through a few more chapters. But as it went on there were more and more contradictory statements/actions. It got more confusing as a character would say one thing and then completely flip the script. The whole thing with the moon goddess was flawed, its like she isn't revered as a goddess. No one seems to believe anything that she says as fact. They never gave the male a chance with the whole memory loss, to remember. Then everything became his fault? when she was supposed to help him get his memories back? There's more flaws in the plot and characters, including the grammar/spelling and sentence structure."
The idea was good the story was one of the worst I have read on inkitt (leaving her make for 10 years he comes back rapes her and everything is happy ever after again)
"She let her mate rape her while in the forest and everything was just a okay again, forgave him and everything went back to 7 normal? That's just doesn't make sense "
