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On the run from a man that is destroying her family, Annabelle takes refuge on a cattle ranch, working under the protection of the owner. But how long do you think it will take before Annabelle falls for her boss' son, Grady? And how long do you think it will take before Grady persuades Annabelle that they are so right for each other and he would give his life for hers, if that's what it took to keep her safe?
Hey, ya'll...
I just wanted to let you all know that this is my first story... I actually started this story when I was seven, but I didn't really get a title until a couple weeks ago!
But I wanted to let you all know that I would love honest feedback. Anything I can get will help.
Thank you
Ya'll have a blessed day!
-GigiEllen
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Aelyn Raven: Wieder eine tolle Geschichte. Leider bin ich erst jetzt dazu gekommen sie zu lesen, aber das tut der Geschichte keinen Abbruch *g* ich freue mich schon auf den nächsten Adventskalender
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Silvia: Sehr schön geschrieben, mit Spannung von Anfang bis Ende. Tolle Geschichte .
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MoonlightN🌕: I absolutely love Sully. He's such a mature, patient, and understanding character—a complete green forest. 💚I love Sorsha too. She's strong, resilient, and easy to admire. They're a perfect match, and watching their relationship grow with patience, trust, and love was beautiful.The way their bond d...
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Xonereth: I really enjoyed this story. It was pretty straightforward plot wise, uncomplicated. Loved the characters and the world. It unfolded at a good pace. Keep writing and I will definitely check out your other works!
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C.: Ich habe so oft herzhaft gelacht. Was für eine tolle Geschichte. So schön geschrieben. So schön, flüssig lesbar. Ich lieb‘s. Mir tun die Herren in der Geschichte fast leid, die Frauen sind reine Naturgewalten. Lustig, verschmitzt, offen, direkt. So schön. Danke für diese Geschichte und das wir sie l...
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Obsidian: He's hilarious. Like, actually. I loved it. You're writing style is great, although you could do with a few less murmurs and mutters. I know it sounds critical, but I have the same problem and I hate it. Overall, it was one of the best stories I've read on here so far. I liked it better than those M...
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