What is your opinion?
Love it.
"I'm so excited to see where this goes! I'm so intrigued! "
Review on the 3 first chapters available
"The story seems interesting and we want to know more and more as we read the chapters. The characters are well described and so are the places. With only 3 chapters, there are a lot of questions and I want to have the answers to these questions so I'll read the book, I guess. I don't give five star for the writing style because some sentences are too long for me and so it gets a little bit confusing. I had to re-read some of them. But that's only my personal opinion and once again, I enjoyed most of my reading time. I also give four star for grammar and punctuation as there are some grammar mistakes and misuse of punctuation. I know that punctuation rules differ from a country to one another, and that it can be hard to do it good. I had the same issues and still have to rework some of the chapters I wrote myself to correct that. It it is corrected, I will definitely change my rating as this one is not a "judging" one, but a one to advice with my little knowledge of non-native writer. I really like your story anyway and I will probably read your other work. That's the most important: you got a reader today 😉 Keep on writing because you are good ! "
Interesting story...
"Interesting storyline, I personally, really liked all the descriptions. It's like I'm in the middle of the events. Good job, author! Keep writing more :)"
