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origin: death wears a green cloak

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Summary

in the biblical days where people lived forever, we killed God. and so came the creation of Our kingdom. for the mortals i took the mantle, creator of the Finite Spirit. upon my body i bear the marks of this ruling. for the wicked there was Hell, creator of a sweet land of the peculiar Star Children, and there we find a church full of cursed souls. for the land of the good, there was God, who kept them with promises. because God was vulnerable, so must be the one who took upon themself that mantle. and so our 'God' is the only deity susceptible to my domain. this is how the World came to be.

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Ongoing
Chapters
1
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n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

The masses, swaths and waves of white fabric twisting into one another, bowed in prayer to their Lord. A large, ornate trio of overlapping stars were strung from the highly arched ceiling, hung so heavily it was almost as though they were bowing in return. The priest at the front, all draped in a black robe strung across his thin, bone-like frame, chanted verses of their holy book.

idina, role of god in Sky ~ marfile, who starts with Mortal ~ alatte, who keeps the Sinly Dead ~ whence they hath killed the Lord, ~ our Souls hath been set loose ~ and We keep ourselves with Prayer ~ idina ~ marfile ~ alatte, ~ blessings to all. We take this into our arms and we keep our Book safe, via 19:120

The closest religion to the Truth, the religion that the Ladies of the House came due. Their Book may have held some truths over falsehood, but they were still far from it. Reader, this tale is the Truth of what transpired four thousand years ago, whence three young women who weren’t human at all took matters into their own hands, the Children of the Lord, and killed God.

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