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His obsessession

"Loved the story"

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Plot twist is great

"I love the story but it broke my heart 😭 . Im used to having the normal happy ending here in this app. Don't get me wrong, it is still a happy ending, but 😭😭😭😭😭. "

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His obsession

"All I can do is cry, even though there was a "happy" ending.... It wasn't so happy.it should of been Lorenzo marring the young lady and the other one dead. Love the story and the feelings that this book brought out. I love to read where your emotions are involved it means you did a great job! Well done"

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His Obsession

"A beautiful love story with strong characters and a surprise ending"

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His obsession

"It was a good read but sad ending "

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His obsession

"Loved it hated you killed him awesome read"

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Wow just marvelous I enjoyed reading it alot thus novel is something I am always waiting anxiously good work misty wishes.

"I think it's a marvelous romantic story I am also that sort of person who would want such a strong partner in the presence of whom I would feel safer so the author has really got the skills to enhance imagination with her words.Superb novel would recommend it to my husband ;) "

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Her obsession

"I love this story so much. The suspense alone is killing me. Its a story I will recommend for my friends any time and any day. Please update soon."

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Interesting and cliff hanger

"There seems to be a lot of thrilling instances that keep coming up."

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Love it!

"Great story, can't wait to read more."

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His obsession

"I LOVE THE STORYLINE AND CAN NOT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN"

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Confused love

"I like the story itself..i will recommend it to every one"

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Mustaken

"Too much suspense and brutality It was supposed to be a romantic story "

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His obsession is great so far

"I love the plot and cnt wait for the next update, I already recommended it to a friend hope she will download the app."

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Cool story

"I like the book and am excited to finish it to find out what happens"

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Worth the reading

"At this time there isn’t anything it’s a very good story and I’m invested in finding out what happens in the end."

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His Obsession

"I thought the book was complete (my bad); now I cannot wait for the next chapters. Don’t leave us hanging too long, please"

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Obsession

"This is what I would call, bombasticly entertaining, awesome job with th characters, jounrey /storylines! You have a bright future ahead with storytelling! I just wrote my first story on this website! It’s called “True Ballistic Supremacy: A Spy Story” It would mean the world to me if you wrote a review, comment and just share your honest though. Great job with the story. 👍👍"

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His obsession

"I like how the story is progressing and I am expecting more "

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Interesting story

"Interesting "

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