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Kudos for writing such a masterpiece

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Good Read

"This novel was a very interesting novel with characters and a plot that really drive the story. There were a couple parts where I questioned what would happen next and once I began reading I couldn't put it down. I highly recommend it to anyone who loves the fantasy genre. My favorite character would have to be Wendell. To me, he was a very intriguing protagonist that was relatable and kept the readers wondering what he was do next. I loved the epilogue and thought that it was the perfect way to end a story! A great read!"

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Good read for fantasy genre fans

"As a fan of fantasy, I enjoyed this story. It was entertaining to read, but I think the biggest problem was its pacing. I felt like it dragged a bit too long and felt that some of the really short chapters or just some descriptions could've been taken out. But the characters and plot made me want to keep reading and so I did."

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Well crafted story

"This was a well written and interesting adventure. I admit, for me, it lagged a little in the middle. But the beginning was so intriguing that I absolutely wanted to know what would happen to the protagonist. It took a while to get to the main story line but I never felt bored learning more about Wendell, his world and what he and his friends needed to do to survive. I think it's that careful character and world building that kept me reading. My only disappointment was that his childhood friends disappear from the story and that Violet and Karen don't have larger roles. I wanted to know more about all of them. Considering the patriarchal kingdom, it would have been intriguing to see the author delve into the princesses lives and how they truly felt about being given away as rewards. In other words, I enjoyed the characters and was eager to understand them a little better."

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