My Baby (Fan Fiction) by Thequeen Thequeen at Inkitt
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My baby (fan fiction)

Summary

It's a more in depth version of My baby on Wattpad by Qvvveen go check to out.This is not my work I'm just practicing my writing and filling some blanks of the story.so Enjoy and give all the props to Qvvveen.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Warning this is not my original story this is a story already written by a great writer I'm just a huge fan adding to a already great story.The Original story is on Wattpad written by Qvvveen so go check it out.Check out my Pinterest its thequeen thequeen it's called My Baby(It goes by chapter so)

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Lorenzo PoV

Ohh!That feels amazing, I throw my head back oh this feel good she keeps going fuck she's good at this.I look down to see Emma or was it Mia fuck I don't know or care,she's giving me head on my way back to the states I love when I get what I want.Especially after that long hard ass week in France.Aw this feels good she's going deep.Fuck I'm gonna cum.She uses her tongue to to work me over as I finish she looks at me.Wanting something I hand her a $20 dollar bill.

"Thanks can I get a Sprite and some Peanuts",she looks at me wanting something. I say "Bitch I got what I wanted so go get me my sprite", I demand dismissing her. She hurries to do what she told. I harshly grab my drink from her.She looks like she afraid good she remember who she's talking to.She walks away to the front of the cabin and close the door.


After 9 hours and 56 minutes we finally landed.I got off the plane and walked to a black and gold Rolls Royce."I need some good news TJ" I say."Well the deal is running smoothly" he said while looking at a tablet. "In two days the shipment will ship out to Vasquez",he said looking at me."How was your flight" he ask."Same old same old "I say Resting my head on the leather seat."OK" he says not believing me but dropping the topic.

TJ (the black one)

"What happened while I was gone anything interesting",I ask. "No not really we got this cute new girl though in math class"He says smirking. "She's a Cute blackgirl with a nice body ,big tits but not too big and a nice juicy ass and she can dress. She got dreads down to her ass and a small waist. I thought you can have fun with her So I told the boys to stay away.So have fun with her.'I'm not in the mood to have another whore on me"I say Through Gritted teeth.

We finally pull up to the dorms I get out.And grad my bags out of the trunk."Oh and by the way the red group is opening a new club so you have to make an appearance to show support"."Ill text you the address it opens at 9:00 tonight", day's turning his key in his dorm lock.


Fuck I just want to be alone tonight.I go in and lay down on my bed and fall asleep.

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