Inkitt
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Great read

"It was a great read. I laughed, and I cried great story lone well written "

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Great Storyline

"Definitely needs proofreading for some misplaced names, spelling, and grammatical errors. Loved this story so much! I was glad to see the ending."

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Love it

"I love your dedication to writing am pretty much envious 😍😍😍😍"

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Writing style holds reader

"Very captivating m, few spelling mistakes for pronouns but otherwise good writing "

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Love the story

"Great story"

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The vampire King and the werewolf

"I like the plot, and every one represented, keeps you guessing what will happen next, hope to read more of the author,s works"

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The omega's fate

"Brilliant story and very engrossed. My only criticism would be that you flit between characters and I have to reread until I can fathom who we are talking about. Maybe a name when you are flitting between people/scenes. Cant wait for the update "

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