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Immortalia

"I genuinely enjoyed this story. The pacing was great, the characters were compelling, and the plot kept me curious about what would happen next. The author clearly put a lot of thought into the world and the emotional layers of the characters. It made the journey feel immersive and memorable. I’d absolutely recommend giving this one a read."

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Intrigued

"So far I find the story addicting. I love the uniqueness. It's well written and keeps me guessing. Job well done so far."

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Immortalia

"I think... This should be a movie"

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Immortalia

"This book is amazing. Not cliche or typical at all. It's a one of a kind and I'd gladly read it again!"

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Immortalis

"The story is delightful!"

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The Outsider

"Love this book full of adventure and great story line. I love books where from the first page I am already drawen to the story. "

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Read it, its AWESOME

"Plot is wowow like cant stop reading, stimulating, keeps us on our toes and it is an exciting crazy world which makes such a delightful read. "

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Immortalia

"It has a nice story line, not any heavy romance and just enough intrigue to keep one interested"

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A brand new kind of story?!

"Following Aurora’s point of view is intriguing. I want to know more about her and what she obviously can no longer recall clearly. What is the end game? How does haw tech connect? Is Ron actually Aron? There’s lots to think about and look forward to so far. The writing is very well done and engaging. I’m looking forward to reading more!"

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Great so far

"Very different concept. Loving it so far. "

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Well written/easy to follow

"This book was very well written. The plot was original, easy to follow and flowed well from chapter to chapter. Highly recommend! "

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Exceptionally well written and an excellent read!

"I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. The concept of wriring a story tying Caine into the evolution of the Phoenix is exceptionally well thought out and a surprising but satisfying twist. I truly loved it and cant to read more about Aurora and Arron's adventures to find the catalyst and see how well their love will grow during the trials they will face."

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Immortalia

"I have always liked stories with immortals as the main characters, and this one didn't disappoint! there were lots of surprise twists in the plot, but Zachary was the most surprising of them all! Al in all this was a great story line. I look forward to reading part two-n-three! NRF"

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Awesome

"I absolutely loved it!! I finished it in three days actually. it was an easy read and the plot was easy to follow. I love the characters and can't wait for the next book of you ever do write it!! I did notice a few grammar errors, but everyone makes mistakes! it wasn't anything so serious that it distracted me from the story. "

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Quite Good

"Honestly I haven't read the whole thing yet but I can say I can grasp pretty well the scenes. The development of the personages is interesting and consistent. The setting brings in a innovative feeling to the story. The only thing is the beginning is a bit ambiguous and with a few grammatical mistakes. Overall I really enjoy reading it. Keep the good work up!"

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For you

" Once i started this cause of its science related title imortalia. And i am glad to read it, the plot was nice and characters are lovable specially aurora and aaron unsaid kind of chemistry."

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