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I love

"Beautiful 😫"

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Like a moth to a flame

"This book has kept me reading and I love it when I find gems such as this one I can never fill guess what’s going to happen but it draws me in and forces me to keep reading "

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Review by Alexandra

"This story is a gripping and intense adventure filled with vivid imagery, emotional depth, and compelling characters. The author skillfully immerses the reader in Annabell's harrowing journey, capturing her physical and emotional struggles with raw honesty. The blend of mystical elements such as Joshua's mysterious abilities and the prophecy adds a captivating layer of intrigue and world building that keeps the reader eager to learn more. The pacing is dynamic, alternating between high-stakes action and intimate moments of vulnerability, which enhances the story's emotional impact. Overall, it's a well-crafted tale of resilience, mystery, and destiny that leaves a strong impression and invites continued exploration of its intriguing universe. I hope you like my review "

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It has potential

"It is an interesting story, and it did make me want to keep reading to find out what would happen next, but the language needs to be revised. There were typos and awkward sentence structures, plus a few inconsistencies with the use of capital letters and italics. These are all things that can easily be fixed, and the story does have some potential, it just needs to be worked on a bit more. "

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