What is your opinion?
Fantastic!
"I'm not sure which I enjoy more - the characters or the world! Hitting the end of one of these book is always disappointing and I dread the day I run out of POZ stories. There are a few minor typos but nothing too jarring and certainly not a deterrent. This is a great story we'll worth reading! On to the next!!"
Brilliant
"I was lucky enough to read this as a manuscript when Paul was just starting to let folk read his tales. Such an amazing world and I envy Paul's talent to bring this to life for all of us to enjoy. "
Compelling futuristic tale
"Great story. Thank you for sharing. Your character development was amazing. Getting the reader to empathize with the protagonists quickly. "
Great front to back
"The Good: The main character is funny, relatable, and enjoyable to follow. The story structure is well-made and maintained, with little in the way of lag or distraction from the material. It is well-written throughout and often funny and endearing. The world itself is well-constructed and realized, making it easy to place yourself in the environment to enjoy the ride. The Bad: I honestly struggle to find something to complain about. The Advice: Submit your work to some contests if you haven't. Beyond that, I have nothing to really add. This work needs little in the way of polish and is worthy of consideration for publishing in my opinion. Well done! I really enjoyed this story and look forward to continuing it. This stands above almost any other story I have read on this site thus far."
Hardcase
"I really enjoyed this story. Great characters, especially the main character Millie who is a real hardcase. A very engaging and well written story. Unlike a lot of books nowadays this story is relatively light on the expletives and sex which in my opinion makes for a more relaxed and enjoyable read. I would recommend this book to anyone that likes things a bit sci-fi mixed with intrigue, action, drama and some great humor. I look forward to reading more in the series "
A look at the future
"Interesting characters and I wonder if this is what our future looks like, something to think about "
Millie the gunsinger
" A great story well written and with 3 minor mistakes. I enjoyed the characters and their adventures. I hope we have more stories about Millie and Twenty. Bill Lesburg "
