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"Awesome book. You are an amazing writer. The characters and plot were awesome. Sean and Ivy perfect. Will recommend to my friends. Can't wait to read more. ❤️"

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"loved the book never stop writing cause ur good at and i dont know you but i thought u should know im proud of u"

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"Great story ! Keep me in suspense! Great characters! Great ending! "

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"Absolutely loved this story! Excellent although disturbing yet relevant plot, strong beautiful characters. Thank you for sharing "

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"I loved this story! There needs to be a sequel. I want to know how Bitsy progresses and Ivy... She will be great to join the club and would like to see if there will be a sibling or two for Bitsy. Great story! Definitely no complaints here. Thanks for the great read."

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"Great story. You a beautiful job writing this. I hope you never went through this horror. Sometimes if things like this happen to someone talking or writing about helps with the getting better. Abuse of any sort is a trauma but physical can heal more then the mental abuse Mental abuse is hard to forget it’s always their. Sometimes it can be hidden in the back of the mind but it will sometimes sneak out"

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Amazing storyline

"This has gotta be one of my favorite stories I have read. Every chapter keeps me hanging on and wanting to know more! The character development is not too fast or crazy which is great because I feel like we get to see the characters heal and develop at their own rate - which is never linear. Cannot recommend highly enough!!"

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"Enjoyed reading this story hope there is a follow up "

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Excited!

"I read only the first paragraph and I was immediately hooked! This is the type of author that can easily capture one's attention and keep them coming back for more... For the chapter that I had read (I plan on reading more) I must say that...the way she describes this woman and all of her troubles it feels as if you're in the story yourself! I'm excited to see where this story goes! Keep up the amazing work"

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Horribly capturing

"Terrible story, meaning the ordeals she's going through. Need to keep reading through her pain as it triggers something familiar in me. Reading the words of "someone else" kind of helps me get some distance to my old life, working through it"

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