24 Hour Love

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Summary

A man broken in heart prays to god to get love so that he can improve on his mistake in the previous relationship. The god grants the wish in the unknown condition of being trapped under the loop of 24 hour where the same day will start again, and the same events will happen. He, however, will remember all the events in the previous timeline and will be inside the loop as soon as he realizes his mistake. The loop can only break when he will understand the mistakes committed in the first relationship (before granting the wish) and successfully complete the consequences.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The last day?

He woke up, cleaned the room from the condition, went directly to Nottingham, and met Emma. He was surprised to see Emma with someone else.

“Hey Emma, I came to talk to you about something.“, told Joe, seeing the other person.

“Hey Joe, I thought we had moved in our life. And for an introduction, he is Chris and Chris he is Joe, my ex”, told Emma, introducing them in between.

“Hey Joe, Thank you for being with her in her worst time. She thanked you a lot while talking about you”, told Chris.

“Thank you, Chris. Can I talk to Emma for a moment, alone” asked Joe.

“Sure, I will be at the parking lot,” replied Chris.

Chris went from the scene, and now Emma and Joe were together in the background.

“How is it possible, when I met you yesterday, you were not in a relationship, and now during reset again, you are,” asked Joe.

“What you are talking about, we are meeting for the first time after the breakup, and for your information, I have moved on,” replied Emma.

It was hard for Joe to take on, but from the loop, he has learned one thing: you have no control over the situation.

“Yes, I understand, and this is all because of my carelessness. I never cared about you during the relationship, and now also I am being selfish, but no more. I came to say best of luck to you with your new relationship. Hope I can be a best friend at least”, told Joe.

“Joe, you are the best person I have met till now. Despite losing your parents, you have reached here, supported me, and made me what I am, but you must understand love is not about how good you have been. It is about giving fully to the other one. Both have their desire and expectation, and you must at least try to work for those expectations and desires. I know you will find someone great, someone much better than me, but the truth is it’s not me. I have already moved on. Love never gives a second chance; a lover can. I waited, but you never came to say sorry”, told Emma.

“I know, and I will remember the mistake for the rest of my life. Thank you for supporting me when no one was there. I will never forget your contribution”, told Joe.

They smiled, and both went their separate way.

Joe stopped doing drugs and other nasty stuff. He went for a job interview and got a job in a good company with his knowledge and experience.

He went to sleep peacefully and woke up. To ensure the loop’s exit, he checked the phone for Christine, and there was. THE LOOP WAS STILL ON.