What is your opinion?
Great start !
"Intriguing plot. There is magic and spells, everything for a good dark fantasy story. The FP goes from abused to sudden tsundere, and I wonder what triggers such shift. Beware of italic, it has a purpose and using it as you do, is not advised. There were many répétitive parts about her mother, one particular dialogue with her brother. It was as if it came out of nowhere. (Breakfast scene) Despite some editing, this dark fantasy I’m sure, seems promising. I’m modifying this review to help you. A five to encourage, yet it wasn’t fair from me not to point out some things that can easily be fixed."
I love it
"Very deep and emotional book. I could feel all the emotions within the main character. I am very interesting what will happen and how she will overcome that trauma. Her family is disgusting and her brother, I am speechless. I love that book and I will keep reading it. "
Excellent Writing!
"The first chapter itself captured the essence of the story. I was captivated from the get go! Can't wait to read more!"
Icy vain which book one
"This is very excellent plotting you have here. I can visualize the story you are trying to tell. I love where you are going with this book and can't wait to read more. Great job on storytelling. Books that have anything to do with witches vampires or werewolves is my type of reading. "
Great Start!
"Very dramatic beginning for this story. Although there are some grammatical errors, you really feel Winter's pain and torment, it definitely leaves you wanting more. Good Job !! :)"
Great potential
"It's easy to see how much love this writer is putting in to their work. A few technical things to work on, but the the plot is great. This writer has great potential, as does this story. Well done! I look forward to reading more."
Ice vain witch
"This story has great potential to become an interesting read once a few of the edges are smoothed out! A little confusing as seems quite fast paced but I'm a very tired mum of 5 so that maybe just my exhausted mind. Keep writing, I'm sure there will be a lot more interesting twists and turns ahead "
Great potential
"I think it has wonderful potential, although I’m very confused for some of it I don’t know if it has some misplaced words that was missed during correction or I’m not reading right. I definitely want to keep reading it so I can see the bigger picture of what the author is going to color out."
Needs polishing but interesting idea
"I can see where you’re heading with it but even for a first draft it’s rough in places. One thing I like to do is read my chapters out loud to help catch errors and I clean those up so it’s a better first draft. I’ll still be revising Locked by Destiny but it makes a more readable draft I think. Keep working on it and hopefully winter survives her crazy family. :)"
