What is your opinion?
Love it
"I can not believe how amazing this story is. I love the individual povs of Blaze and Davinah. The story is progressive. Can't wait to read what happens next."
Well done
"Pretty amazing! Some grammatical issues but since its a first draft, it's fine. Love it! "
New book
"It seems like a great book one from my normal genre of reading. I can’t wait to read more of what the author has planned."
DYNASTY
"I like the plot. Davinah and Blaze are so different yet so alike. They both help people in different ways. I like Blaze's story so far. He's very noble and of good character. He is a good leader to his group. Davinah is a rich, bratty, arrogant, titled girl with a heart for the unfortunate. I enjoy her personality and how she dressed. The story makes me want to know more of what happens next. The writing style is a little bit off. Sometimes it sounds like a different voice and then back to the original. Understandable given that this is a collab between two people. Anyway, good job! I'd like to see what happens next."
Good structure, characters and creativity - world building and grammar need some work.
"Although this story is not yet complete, it is off to a good start. I like how it changes the perspective between the two characters Blaze and Davinah, as it makes for a more complex plot. Things that work well in this story are: THE SETTING- The Ordic empire is an interesting setting for this story, and is described beautifully - although it would be nice to have a bit more world building to learn more about it as a place. DIALOGUE- The dialogue is uniquely tailored to each character, and is often realistic. CHARACTERS- Characters are intriguing and plentiful. THE TITLE - The title is very unique and intriguing, and sums up the themes of the story well. Things that could be improved: as mentioned before: WORLD BUILDING - perhaps in future chapters the author could provide more details about why there is slavery and oppression, and perhaps anyb other empires or kingdoms nearby? PACING- At times it feels like the plot can be quite rushed through or a little bit confusing. GRAMMAR: Not a major issue, but it would be nice if the author could perhaps get someone to read through their book and fix any grammar mistakes - in particular the past and present tense can be confused sometimes. THE SYNOPSIS/SUMMARY - once again, this is not a major issue, but it might benefit the author to have a longer, more descriptive summary so that readers know more what to expect. Overall, it is a nice read, and I would recommend in particular to fantasy fans."
