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The alpha kids

"Wonderful story, with ups and downs just like real life. Loved the happy ending "

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Plenty of Action

"There is no stop of the auction... some if it I was cheering for and the other I shook my head. So glad my life doesn't even being to compare with all the drama... or the babies! "

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The alpha kids

"Such a good book"

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Great

"Wonderful story,dont want to end"

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Like the characters

"I started reading and couldn't put it down. The sister was crazy though"

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The Alpha Kids

"Great story."

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The Alpha Kids

"One to read, love the plot and characters"

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Beautiful 🥰🥰

"That was so amazing ♥️ I really enjoyed reading your novel ♥️ can't wait to read more of your novels ♥️♥️♥️"

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Alpha kids

"Superb and interesting "

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Ooooookkkkkllklk

"Okoooooooksoooogood"

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The Alphas kids

"Love they ups and downs in this book."

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Alpha kids

"Great story really enjoy good grammar spelling and all thanks so much"

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The Alpha Kids

"Amazing work 👏 "

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The Alpha's kids

"Lovely novel well written, easy to read "

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Okay but the proofreading clearly wasn't done

"Too many spelling mistakes, and errors. Names wrong or spelt wrong. Too many similar names it's hard to know who is who. "

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Brenda’s

" Well let’s jump in now .Ang I like her feel sorry for her .There all kinds of emotions. I think after all this time she is still she is still too weak for him.Now as for him I like him but I want to kick his butt up between his shoulders.Another thing to much she thought and he thought the same thing Too much this is a love hate novel "

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No good directions !

"Maybe it’s me, it’s so hard to Get what’s going on because of name issues."

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The Alpha Kids

"I felt that it lacked context when it came on to certain characters. But I see where the author was trying to get to. Overall it was a good novel just spend some more time with each character."

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FAST PACED

"I tried, i really tried but this way too fast paced. Everything is happening so fast its hard to grasp where the story is going. There's no character depth or details about the relationship dynamics between the characters. The story does not draw you in, the author should have taken time to build up the charaters. This may sound a little harsh but i'm only saying it because the storyline was good and interesting enough for me to wanna read but maybe next time work more on world and character building. This felt like a summary of what the actual story is or should be. I feel this would have worked out better if it were a short story. "

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