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Seelenfriede

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Summary

Eine Entscheidung kommt durch Zufall. Dieser Geist spricht von innen. Jeder Schritt, den ich gehe, bringt mir Seelenfrieden.

Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Der Fehler

Hast du schon einmal das Gefühl gehabt, dass deine beste Eigenschaft im Leben aus der Sicht der ganzen Welt nur ein Fehler ist?


Das ist leider deine traurige Geschichte. Du bist nicht in der Hölle, noch nicht. Die Vorhölle ist laut und doch still, dort hast du ein zwiespältiges Gefühl, aber du erkennst dein Selbst nicht mehr.


So ist deine Seele ohne Gesicht vor dem Spiegel. Du erkennst dich selbst nicht mehr, aber auch der Spiegel ist mit der Zeit zu einem trüben, matten Glas geworden.


Es gibt keine Zukunft mehr, nur die messerscharfe Nacht, das Unglück, das Blut, ein Irrtum, ein Fehler, und keine Bedeutung mehr für dich. Und du kennst das.


Die innere Zerstörung ist logisch.


Die Antwort brennt von innen... klar und elegant: Selbstmord.



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I think this piece would have been a convincing read for sure, if not for the included writing mistakes which make it hard at times to figure out what exactly you want to tell with your words. At rare times, some lines also make no sense then. If you have the script in flawless English, I could properly point out the mistakes and give you tips of improvement.

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