Can You Feel My Heart?
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Can You Feel My Heart?

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Summary

Can you feel it beat beneath the skin? Can you feel it stop when I'm breaking? The beat speeding when you are near an the slow rhythm when you are gone? Do you see my broken smile?

Status
10yrs ago
Chapters
23
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Numb


As a person who is hurt a lot,

It is rare to find love.

It is rare to find happiness

In a world that tries so hard

to rip you apart.

The heartaches never stop

In this life.

To find a man who you can call

Your best friend

is a rarity

A blessing.

In a world that brings you down

It helps to have someone

To help you up

When you fall.

I’m still on the ground though

No one has helped me up yet.

I’ve been knocked down so many times

It’s impossible to get back up.

On the legs that have stopped.

The water that once flowed seems frozen,

The blood that runs through my veins are now so cold,

I am unfeeling,

All I hear on the TV is static,

All i feel in my chest,

Is emptiness,

A dark void,

That once was filled

With happiness and love,

Is now just empty,

All I feel in the end is...

Numb.


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