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😍😍

"This is good. Nice plot. 😍🤩 weĺl done! "

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Amazing ♥️

"That was so amazing ♥️ I really enjoyed reading your novel ♥️ the storyline was fantastic and beautifully written ♥️ i can't wait to read more of your novels ♥️♥️"

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Nice book

"Nice book. Keep writing."

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Locked out

"Loooove it 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"

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Locked out

"Wow!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Locked out

"That was so great I am waiting for the book about Ginny I think it’ll be so good like this one"

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Locked out.

"I know she’s not the type of girl to get revenge but I really hope she does. Waiting on more chapters is painful. I wanna read till the end 🥺 update soon!! "

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Loving this

"I’m really liking this story so far!"

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Locked out

"I want to read more! I need more updates."

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Good read

"Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable though! "

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Locked out

"The book is well-written and plotted. However, the English here and there make some of the sentences incoherent. Overally its has a great plot. "

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I enjoyed the story

"The book is good, I think it was a little short, and confusing in some areas. The ending was abrupt. I think with a little editing, this book has to potential to become a must read."

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Solid effort edits needed.

"I loved the main characters in this book and although it’s a common trope I think the writer did well with the storyline and maintaining suspense in revealing twists. The inner monologue of Shadiw was great fun to read. I did struggle with the writing though. Style wasn’t bad but there were a huge number of errors. To the point it became hard to understand at points. The writer often used similar sounding words that didn’t fit in the context of the sentence and some idioms used were just plain wrong. But I got most confused with the Fettering character his name was constantly changing. It went from Fett to Rett to Rhett and back to Rett. Honestly I don’t know what it was meant to be. "

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