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What is your opinion?

Don't know the title

"So far I like the book. It is well written and has a good plot. I am glad that I found it. "

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Oooo

"Good and prty"

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Story

"Great story so far"

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Sex slace

"I really liked the intensity of the sex and the submissiveness of it. Works a very promising plot"

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The slave

"Good I like it "

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Good relations

"Nice writong skills.good narration using grammar and punctuation correctly.nice way of ending dialogues"

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Very good

"The story is very erotic and if you like slave-master stories, you will find a really good one. It's really good. "

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I like the way author stated the story i like their romance and impatient to know what will happen further..

"I like the story statement and their romance their is nothing to be dislike in this! I would recommend it to my friends I rated it because it's worth "

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Likes it but don't know book name

"Very good sex book and cant wIt to see what she learns"

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Loveeed it

"It's unfortunate that i can not read it anymore but this one is so good"

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The sex slave

"This book has been an easy read so far. Not a lot of fluff, which I really appreciate. And yes, I would refer this book! "

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The Sex Slave

"I loved it so much and please update "

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The sex slave

"I liked everythingggggg"

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The Sex Slave

"We all can have our opinion but don’t take it to heart you just write what makes you happy, you can’t make everyone else happy . I enjoyed so far would like to read more couldn’t pull it up in Amazon hope I can find it"

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the sex slave the first day

"loved it but please go back and fix grammatical errors"

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The Sex slave: the First day

"Interesting story. 🔥🔥🔥"

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Bon

"Je ss tres satisfaite de ton histoiy"

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Great read

"Great read , good start to story straight in , if like erotc fiction this is one for you can't wait to read more "

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Sex slave 1st day

"Extremely erotic read. And if this is just the rough draft the final version is going to be phenomenal. "

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Sex slave

"Great plot...loving g it so far "

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